Moriah Leila

I really like this poem, as it has a historical aura about it, and I love that. I really enjoyed the part about the earl gray not being spilled on ...

Wow, I thought this poem was so powerful and truthful. I love the ending. And I like the part about the cemetary being a wave of gravestones. Such great imagery! ...

Okay, my major problem with this was how you forced the rhyme. It was obvious that you were trying to get the lines to rhyme, as none of them really ...

I really enjoyed this poem. It is hard to be content when you are focusing on something so superficial as your physical appearance. Beauty fades with age, and so one ...

I really have to agree with Snoink and Kamas on this one. We need more imagery, as you seem to be telling us everything that is happening. It makes this ...

While the imagery is very good, I felt like you were trying too hard. Maybe you used too many adjectives. I just felt like there was no story, no purpose ...

I disagree with Smorgishborg, I don't think you necessarily to come away from a poem with a new understanding or changed outlook on life. Sometimes it is nice just to ...

I'm guessing, you yourself are a linguist? Perhaps you aspire to be one? Some of the language used confused me, as it has been so long since I was in ...

Wow, talk about morbid. It was quite an impactful poem to read. While not exactly my cup of tea, it still held my interest, and it was written quite beautifully. ...

Hey! Ha ha, my first review of your poetry, this should be fun. I really enjoyed the first poem, as I could almost visualize the red exterior of the locker ...

I thought this was a very creative way to express your admiration for this politician and would certainly be useful for his campaign! I did not like the fact that ...

I thought this poem was simple and beautiful. You didn't use too many metaphors to jumble it up and I appreciate that. I agree, child's laughter can be one of ...

I thought this poem was so very true, in that, it is difficult for us to understand each other as human beings, when our pasts and experiences are so varied. ...

Wow, I really enjoyed this poem. While I am not a fan of boxing myself, you painted a riveting portrait of this boxer. My only real critique is how you ...

It is so refreshing to read a poem where the girl is not envious of her friend's beauty. You mention it briefly, but it is evident to me that your ...